The raindrops on the fence
Do they resemble tear drops?
Or do they sparkle like diamonds?
Each gem tries to kiss the greens below it
Trickle, trickle, trickle
Slowly they merge with the leaves
The rain adorns the saplings with rich jade
On which little rubies and garnets rest
The silky breeze caresses them.
The sky dressed in a black robe
Is all set again to start the chorus showers.
Love Always
Susan
Loved this, Susan.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem!
I do love the rain!
Margie :)
Thank you Margie.
ReplyDeleteraindrops, tear drops,
ReplyDeletewhat an inspiration thoughts.
well done.
love the imagery.
What a thrill to land on your amazing poetry land.
ReplyDeleteCheers.
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Reading this second poem, I see that the first was not a fluke. Well done. One question, if I may. You use punctuation in your poetry, which I love and think in necessary, why no commas in: “The sky dressed in a black robe” It is the only line that caused me to pause. My preference, which means exactly nothing, would be: The sky, dressed in a black robe,
ReplyDeleteI’m just sayin’.