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Thursday, February 18, 2010

The Waiting
The afternoon heat welled up
The specks of dust danced in the air
The women in the huts dozed off
A bitch curled up under the shade of the tree
Only the little urchins, waited at the corner
All ears for the distant ringing of the bell
That announced the arrival of the ice candy man.

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Theme Thursday-Bell

9 comments:

  1. wow. nicely done...we used to have an ice cream man come through the neighborhood when we lived in florida...

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  2. Those words took me far away from this winter cold. I can just see it!

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  3. very well done! i was taken away to a hot summer day, far away...
    how i wish it was so!!

    warm smiles,

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  4. Excellent image here, though I dislike summer's swelter...Happy TT!

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  5. I can almost feel the heat while eating ice-cold candy...mmm... Very ambient poem, Susan! Here we are hip-deep in snow... I am almost forgetting what warm sunshine felt like! Happy Weekend to you & yours :o)

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  6. amazing! i could see the huts. ; )
    xoxo

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  7. Ice candy? That's an interesing notion. Our ice cream vans always seem to play Greensleeves . . .

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  8. Nice writing!
    I enjoyed it!
    Thank you!

    Margie:)

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  9. Fabulous.. with shades of longing!

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