I swayed to the rhythmic movement of the train.
Outside, the concrete dwellings gave way
To lonely thatched huts in the green fields.
One-legged cranes snoozed on the fields,
The coconut trees swayed in the breeze.
A gust of wind brought in the stink of damp husks.
A lone boat drifted on the distant river.
Women took a dip in the pond
To ward off the summer heat.
Men sat on river banks patiently
Silent and erect; only their eyes darted
At the fish swimming below.
Urchins with their muddy faces and pearly teeth
Laughed and waved furiously at us.
I swiftly painted the images in my head
And carefully wrapped them among the other treasures.
I can see them even now
While lazing around in my apartment
Far away, from my homeland.
Love Always
Susan
For: Sunday Scribblings- Distant
Carry on Tuesday - In my head I paint a picture
Outside, the concrete dwellings gave way
To lonely thatched huts in the green fields.
One-legged cranes snoozed on the fields,
The coconut trees swayed in the breeze.
A gust of wind brought in the stink of damp husks.
A lone boat drifted on the distant river.
Women took a dip in the pond
To ward off the summer heat.
Men sat on river banks patiently
Silent and erect; only their eyes darted
At the fish swimming below.
Urchins with their muddy faces and pearly teeth
Laughed and waved furiously at us.
I swiftly painted the images in my head
And carefully wrapped them among the other treasures.
I can see them even now
While lazing around in my apartment
Far away, from my homeland.
Love Always
Susan
For: Sunday Scribblings- Distant
Carry on Tuesday - In my head I paint a picture
" ... swiftly painted the images in my head
ReplyDeleteAnd carefully wrapped them among the other treasures ..."
Love this image ...
Wonderful imagery!
ReplyDeleteI can picture it all so vividly!
Bravo on this writing, Susan.
Beautiful scenery well rendered.
ReplyDeleteWe should all have images like these....
ReplyDeleteYou have painted a beautiful word picture. I can see the scene clearly in my mind's eye!
ReplyDeleteThank you all for your lovely comments.
ReplyDeleteThe first line instantly draws me,
ReplyDeletestunning writing.