The whistle of the winds,
And the rustle of the curtains
Awoke me from my slumber.
I strained my eyes in the darkness
And what did I see?
An apparition!
Moving aside the curtain of night,
It loomed above me.
Paralyzed by fear,
But overcome by curiosity
I stared at the ugly monster
And wondered if it was
The spirit of my ancestor.
Waiting for it to pounce on me,
I closed my eyes and said my prayers.
A whimpering beside me made me sit up.
I switched on the night light
And held my crying baby.
The curtain rustled again,
But the apparition had vanished.
Love ALways
Susan
For:[Magpie Tales]
magpietales.blogspot.com
And the rustle of the curtains
Awoke me from my slumber.
I strained my eyes in the darkness
And what did I see?
An apparition!
Moving aside the curtain of night,
It loomed above me.
Paralyzed by fear,
But overcome by curiosity
I stared at the ugly monster
And wondered if it was
The spirit of my ancestor.
Waiting for it to pounce on me,
I closed my eyes and said my prayers.
A whimpering beside me made me sit up.
I switched on the night light
And held my crying baby.
The curtain rustled again,
But the apparition had vanished.
Love ALways
Susan
For:[Magpie Tales]
magpietales.blogspot.com
Such a complete turn at the end - very clever. :)
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you ended it!
ReplyDeleteGood writing, Susan.
hi Ariel.. wonderful job!!!
ReplyDeleteYeah, great ending.
ReplyDeleteThank you Jo. I must admit it took me awhile to come up with that ending.
ReplyDeleteThank you Margie. Have a great weekend.
Welcome back Medhini and Thank you.
Thank you Doctor FTSE.
Haunting!
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